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You took my heart
'Twas broke in two
and tried to put it back with glue
and for just a little while
I walked along
now with a smile
but when the rain came pouring down
all the glue washed to the ground
and my heart was once again
split apart from end to end
You said, "I'll fix it up with tape,
That idea should work just swell"
So I walked the large landscape
Hoping tape would hold it well
but then the tape got old and tore
and held my heart as one no more
You said, "Some rope will do the trick"
and tied it in a knot quite quick.
but when the rope began to fray
my happiness faded away
And when the rope did break apart
we were left back at the start
"I won't quit!", you said so sure,
"I know we can find a cure!"
And as you tried, time and again
I knew you were a true friend
No giving up, hardly a break
you did it all just for my sake.
but after time, your smile paled
I knew you thought that you had failed
You looked like you wanted to cry
You thought,"What is there left to try?"
"There's only one thing I can do!
I couldn't make your heart just fine
So I will give my heart to you
and take your broken heart for mine!"
I stood up, turned and said,"Now
that's something I won't allow!"
You said,"I don't understand."
Then I put forth a closed hand.
My hand opened,
In it did shine,
my heart as one,
there was no line.
You looked at it and just said," wow....
..but I just don't understand how."
Into your eyes I just stared,
"It was the love, and how you cared,
all the time that we have shared,
That is why my hearts repaired."
"Now close your eyes, and please don't peek.
I have a gift of thanks for this."
Then I leaned in right near you cheek
and there I placed a gentle kiss.
You blushed, then smiled and ran ahead.
I wondered which way this path led
There were so many things to say
but that storys for another day.
- Title: Mend
- Artist: Chemicult
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With a good friend,
The heart doth mend. - Date: 07/04/2009
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Chemicult - 11/28/2010
- smile
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- Cherubim Aurora - 07/25/2009
- Absolutely scintillating. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. 5/5
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- YamiEiji - 07/21/2009
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Oh...this one made me cry....
Hope your friend like it...it's so sob sob... ^^ - Report As Spam
- narutoman1996 - 07/10/2009
- deep 5/5
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- JustMikoto - 07/07/2009
- that was so freaking awsome!!!!!!ummm i really really love this poem at first i was like i dont want to read this its going to be boring but i guess i was wroung 5/5 2 thombs ups.Even my lil sis was like wow i like that poem and shes ten awsome 4laugh
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- Chemicult - 07/04/2009
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ah yes, the capitalization. english was never my favorite subject. I'm not very grammatically correct most of the time. ahaha.
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- Greeneroo - 07/04/2009
- This is...simply put, brilliant. You are one of the best writers I have seen, not only on Gaia, but in my whole life. Keep writing and I hope to read more of your work. Just a word, work on capitalization, but other than that, perfect. I have favorited this.
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