"Complaints of violins..."

• Artist: FilipStiq
• Description: "...become my only friends." That's the rest of the title. That's not really the title, but I'm not gonna tell you the real title. That line is actually from an Anberlin song called "Paperthin Hymn."
  
  It's about another character from my books; his name is Lucius, if you want to know.
• Date: 07/08/2009
• Tags: burning coffin

Burn this offer
In mine black eyes
As I shake my coffer
A coffin closed on the street
Housed by a tabernacle of lies

The worlds of men are crashing down
Falling all upon mine crown
And it was a pale shining of dew
That tipped the balance, and my world shattered, too
So raise a funeral dirge in this pyre
And let the flames burn away this liar

and so I lay the pieces at Thy feet...

Comments

[FilipStiq]

Uhm, thanks isom, but... well, let's just say I'm glad the other ratings don't follow your words, eh?

Am I allowed to why it's distasteful? Criticism is welcomed, opinion - abrasive or no - is allowed, but... criticism is much PREFERRED.

[Nerokimatsunaka]

this is very distasteful... 0/5