Blinded

• Artist: XlaceyXunbrokenX
• Description: I don't really know why I wrote this, sometimes I come up with bits and pieces and don't know what to do with them so I add what I think fits. Just random ideas pretty much put together, into something that hopefully can be categorized as a poem.
  Let me know what you think
  Critiques appreciated, both good and bad.
• Date: 07/17/2009
• Tags: blinded darkness death

Darkness cradles my broken body
Reaching, straining to grasp at nothing
Despair and fear overcome me
Blankness fills me to a tipping point
Depression spreads throughout me
What kind of harsh cruelty has been inflicted upon me?
Color, shades and tint of life
All knowledge of it has left my mind
As I sit here, I feel the emptiness of its soul
In loneliness I wonder far
Only to be stopped by what boundaries hold me
This dark reality imprisons me in a life I cannot escape
Freedom seems impossible
For all doors here have been closed
Shut tight and sealed only to be lost forever
I stumble to the ground in tears
Thrashing in pain and wounded hurts
Longing, praying, dying
Coldness makes its way through me
Taking what life is left
Understanding hits me in my last few moments
Of this darkness that has blinded me
While wondering about aimlessly
Death has been watching me
My body quietly rests in the blackened life I walked throughout
While my last breath takes its heave
Complete and utter death deceiving blindness overtakes me
Leaving me in its foreshadowed footprints

Comments

[Archeyah]

Wow, deep.

[confusedbassplayer]

It sounds like you get ramdon hits of insparation. I'm like that to! ...Weaird...