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Nice flowers have just been taken home.
Happy and perky, everybody loves them.
Decent little flowers sit upon the table,
slowly, gradually starting to blend in.
Average little flowers are starting to wilt,
some people almost throw them away.
Poor little flowers are ready to die,
and one day... so will I.
- by lautnerrules43 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/23/2009 |
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- Title: Poor Little Flowers
- Artist: lautnerrules43
- Description: This is a poem, but it's not just about the flowers. the flowers simbolize human life.
- Date: 07/23/2009
- Tags: poor little flowers
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Comments (6 Comments)
- willfemi - 06/20/2012
- :L I rly like it razz
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- BlueProject - 01/02/2012
- I never saw it that way, you are very talented to come up with this great a poem.
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- scitama - 08/11/2009
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I totally saw the symbolism in this poem. Everybody loves the nicest flowers...but the average are often overlooked sad
Good writing smile - Report As Spam
- ElectraShocked - 07/23/2009
- Yay! you took them off!!! Hehe.
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- ElectraShocked - 07/23/2009
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It's really good. the only thing that irritates me is the use of icons in a poem...It totally ruins the flow, But it still deserves a 5/5!
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- cookiemonster_084 - 07/23/2009
- wow, short but so expressive.. i love it smile
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