My One True Love..

• Artist: Kurai Nightclaw
• Description: This poem is for someone i care for more then anyone, even myself i would die for him right now just to be with him forever, i want him to know how i still feel yet i did not know how to show him so this was made i hope all of you like it..and i hope he dose as well.
• Date: 07/28/2009
• Tags: true love

I loved you and I do to this day
we were once so close and yet I can't seem to get myself to say
I love you I love you
please don't leave me behind
my love is true, my love is true
Can't we hit rewind?
Lets return to those days when we were so in love
A feeling deep and honest, and by accident to the side they were shoved
I love you still, and want you back
I have to ask, what do I lack?!
I can
only hope your love for me is still there
even if its only hanging there by just a hair
We can go back to what it once was
and I say this only cuz
I wish you could love me so true as you once did
and as for me, I have these feelings over which I cannot put I lid
I love you I love you
its true its true
please let me return to you
our love is forever, our love is true
forever we can hear each other say, I love you.

Comments

[-Xx_xX-M A D-Xx_xX-]

DX

[Luna Lux Lucis Angelus]

I always knew she had it in her, I could always tell her emotions were never halfbaked, and her heart is big, I knew there was a way for her to channel that, and writing seems to be the way, its really nice. c:

[Marduk Cassiel]

Very nicely done, hon. Well written, it flows very nicely. And the heart behind it is incredible. Absolutely astounding. ^_^

[-Myst Sadakichi-]

That is lovely, hun. Really heart felt and just wonderfully written.

[Luna Lux Lucis Angelus]

I concur soul. very lovely, it appeals to many senses, and you can also connect emotionally, it made me tear up a bit, its beautiful. just beautiful.

[Luna Lux Lucis Angelus]

anywho. PPLZ. YOU SHUD c** REED THIZ

(anywho, peoples. you should come read this)

[blasphemy3113]

This is an awesome Poem.
It's very touching and has a good connection.
It clicks with both body and Mind.
Very lovely.
5/5