Never did the Sun Come Out

• Artist: ravenswood99
• Description: A little poem i wrote on a rainy day. And, no, not based on true events. Just what i was feeling like.
• Date: 08/09/2009
• Tags: never come ravenswood99 rainy

It poured.
Lightning rang out.
There was nothing to do.
I began to pout.
My mother came over
said the sun will come out.
But did it come?
No.
Never did the sun come.

My father was dignosed with cancer.
And we all wished him well.
I cried all day.
My sister bent down
And said it would be ok.
My father died the next day.
Was it ok?
No!
Never would it be ok!

So,
I moped my whole life
soon,
my sister wasn't there to say its ok,
nor my mother
and still
never did the sun come out.

Comments

[King of Trash]

tragic, my grandfather died of cancer, so I really felt the pain in this poem... (until i saw the description..)
oh well, .... 5/5 anyway...