numb

• Artist: o0OKatO0o
• Description: addictions and numb are almost the same but a little different. hope you like.
• Date: 08/09/2009
• Tags: numb

I’m
So numb now
That as I
Drag
And
Scrape
The blade
Down my arm
I cant tell
If im cutting
Into my skin
Or just
Creating
Little lines of
Color
Red as blood
Up and down
Over
And
Over
again

Comments

[3mo cutting ros3]

Wow that was good, great at putting feeling into the poem. Nice structure. I just like it in general. Puts real feelings into the poem

[Araya of Pellinor]

this is pretty creepy.

[mirachan3]

I like the strucure but not so much the message. Although it has a lot of feeling behind it and gives great imagery. I give it a four