Longing for you

• Artist: Primorcian
• Description: the title explains it all its still in the beginning faze but i want to see wat u think so far
• Date: 08/11/2009
• Tags: longing

Every Day I Long For You.



Every day i think of you.

dreaming of what i should do.

when night comes i dream of us.

and when i awake i put up a fuss.

because thats the only time im with you

and im tired of longing for you

there is somthing for me to do

and that is to make you long for me to

Comments

[ThisIsMyDeathbed_x]

welll, to me it sounds like a guy who's a littele too desperate... But that makes it a good poem, cuz i can tell that just from reading it. I think it's the fact that it's short and sweet, and the words "MAke" (last line), and "Tired of longing for you" , which is really effective biggrin 5/5 for the effort and emotion. Read mines maybe? wink

[Primorcian]

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