Love

• Artist: crazyclaire1999
• Description: quick sentence about love
• Date: 08/16/2009
• Tags: love

heart you'll never find who's true to you unless you fight until the night heart

Comments

[Mishtez]

Maybe if you added a few more lines, the readers may be able to understand it better, and it would make your poem more unique? :l

i dont know if this is counted as 'constructive critisism. ' (please ignore spelling) but the first half of your sentence is a bit common. no?

but good for you brave enough to put up your own writing. ;D
good luck

[crazyclaire1999]

i need a comment please