Storm and Spellcraft

• Artist: ArcVoyageur
• Description: I'm just spewing out random stuff from my collection that I'm a little unsure of.
  Feel free to rant on the tale of Atlantis written from my perspective, in lyric form.
• Date: 08/16/2009
• Tags: storm spellcraft symphonic metal

Kingdoms of gold frame the coast
Living in the grace of the waves
Your claim to the sea represents
Amounts of greatness and graves

A curious case they were
Unlike any islands before
The sea encompasses every shore

Ancient myth or doomed empire
Where storm and spellcraft conspire
One nation’s flag for their father
Indivisible, death and oblivion for all

Untouchable, unshakable
Favored by the quakes themselves
Return victorious and revel
On garden tapestries plundered

A black market exchange
All the best from the rest
Fellow gods make one final test

Ancient myth...

Who can favor?
Bombarded by prayers
Are two eternal rivals
The greatest militaries are pawns
In the game for their own survival
Vengeance shall be hers

The shield prevails
And as they fail
A titanic country falls
The sea takes back its call

Ancient myth or doomed empire
Where storm and spellcraft conspire
One nation’s flag underwater
Invisible, death and oblivion for all

Comments

[ElectraShocked]

It's really good. But I think you need a difersnt rhyming pattern, it sounds a bit choppy. Other than that it's amazing, like recreation of the national anthem xD. Good luck! Comment and rate back??