Immune

• Artist: dragafire
• Description: I wrote this poem after hangout with my friends.
  We were in one of my friends basment doing what people do in basements, and I looked over at my friend named Josh and his eyes looked different than everyone elses. I felt like I had to write a poem about it.( I dont really write poety)
  
• Date: 08/19/2009
• Tags: eyes silver drugs enlightenment marijuana

Opalescent,
silver,
illegitimate eyes.

Numb to the pain
Immune to the death of his self conscious.
Seeping down down low low
Until the world is retained.

His mind in a tranquil euphoria
no longer struggles to observe the unseeable.
It only observes the undoughtable thruth of here and now.

Comments

[ShySnowWhiteAnon]

Its oddly pretty. The rythm is not perfect but I can picture what you're on about. 3/5