Revelation 3:16

• Artist: red_ribbon22
• Description: In short I wrote this in a bored/questioning state at church while listening to the sermon?
  Good enough? :)
  oh! I was thinking about actually making this into a story.
  But that,for now is on hold until I get some feedback on this because this is pretty much the basic idea.
  
  Rev 3:16 is one of my fav scriptures in the bible and it actually goes;
  'So because you are lukewarm, and neither hot nor cold, I will spit you out of My mouth.'
  
  Constructive criticism is welcome!
  Please and thank you~
• Date: 08/31/2009
• Tags: church heart sanity death life

A carnal mind
A carnal soul

A persistent way of living

Pushing the limits of sin
Your heart is no longer beating

Loving yourself for the better of ugly
Loving yourself for the sake of sanity

Holding onto the morals of angels
But practicing the thoughts of man

Pushing yourself higher
You'll see that living moment
Pushing yourself higher
You'll soon Breathe the pestilent silence

Smile for the first thought of superiority
You've accomplished less then any Saint but more then any Man
Congratulations to a body purely of flesh!


'So because you are lukewarm, and neither hot nor cold, I will spit you out of My mouth.'

Comments

[KaineLust]

I really like it and have no critisism. Good job and can't wait to hear the story ^-^
5/5 <3

[Soul Paradox]

I really liked this. Honestly, I have no criticism to give ^-^ good job. Got any more? (P.S. - thanks for voting on mine <3 )