chains

• Artist: AJ_Bored4Lyfe
• Description: chains...
  small little poem i made when i was 10
  i was really in to poetry :D
  
• Date: 09/05/2009
• Tags: chains

chains...
chains
keep us away
from what we truly desire
chains
lock us down
so we can never taste freedom
chains
wither us away
from the beginning to end
chains
are the one thing
in our life we can never
get rid of...

Comments

[bassmaster_awesome]

A nice peice of work for ten, have you considered lenghthening it with your skills now? It has a nice idea, but it could be written very deeply from the heart or flopped in 5 mins. But it is a nice base.