Last Breath

• Artist: Echidnachimerax
• Description: Child abuse is a really really common crime amongst americans and canadians it should be stopped. I made this poem about a girl who is struggling with abusive parents.
• Date: 10/10/2009
• Tags: last breath

Pounded and Beat
Wounded inside
Surprised this girl is still alive

Moms always mad dads always drunk
she hides in the corner
she crys in horror

Bruises and scratches on her face
reveal her life and sorrow
she wonders if she will be alive tomorrow

Dad swings and kicks
she screams in pain
over her fathers violent reign

Her last breaths are peacful
her mind starts to stray
has her final last breath and slips away

Comments

[Echidnachimerax]

yes..thanks for your comment...i had an abusive parent so....but ty for your commet : )

[x-TheDevilsAngel-x]

omg that poem is so sad it really gets to me and i think child abuse is horrible sad pore girl