to wounder

• Artist: BD Veloco
• Description: wrote at the top of my head as usual
• Date: 12/21/2009
• Tags: wounder

To wounder is a risk
to understand is the reward
why fight for what we need
why live to only succeed
our destiny is different from each and every one
the meaning of life is always different
now understand the homeless
understand those who need
those who love
those who gave up
the flowers rose pedal has fell more and more each year
our world is dying, more and more we fear
so many scream
but so many are deaf
so many dream
so much death
nightmares are real
its our feelings we really feel
those who cheat
those who weep
those who lie
are those who really die
to coward a way out
for those they all always doubt
nothing more i cant stand
the world i want to understand

Comments

[BD Veloco]

thank you for reading mine, and i'll read yours when i get a chance =D

[BloodStainLoveStory]

not too bad at all smile keep up the good work aye
check out mine and tell me what you think

[vaginas0fsaturn]

best poem i ever read.i feel...(no emotion)just wondering about the world,thanks for opening my eyes.