darkness in my eyes

• Artist: reapers angel16
• Description: sometimes theres a darkness covering your eyes and you dont see something for what it truely is..you defeat the darkness and then you can see what truely lyes ahead
• Date: 12/27/2009
• Tags: darkness eyes

theres darkness in my eyes
the darkness makes me feel alive
darkness falling all around
darkness shadowing my life the curtain of darkness falls down and down
the time to live is now
even with the darkness that surrounds
i will live
i will fight
i will make my way through the darkness even in the dead of night
my eyes are blinded on my true life outside in the world
after all im only me a helpless lost girl
i may not see through the shadow of darkness
but i always know one thing is true
darkness may fall around and shadow my eyes
but it will never beat me
i will win
i will not accept defeat
the darkness will go down and will be beat

Comments

[Kya Akai Kitsune]

its good, needs a little more word variation though at times it seems redundent but in all i like it

[HTOB]

i hate the last line
and take out the 11th line
and it will b ok

[lupetheloopylupe]

dakness is a theme I like using when writing.
inspiring.