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red on white
white on red
red on a newborn's dying head
the doctors, they are in a race,
to save this newborn's dying face,
death her soul will soon embrace
- Title: newborn
- Artist: kilobite
- Description: i wrote this about my dead 1 day old sister
- Date: 01/05/2010
- Tags: newborn
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Comments (5 Comments)
- dtohl - 01/10/2010
- aww man, now I'm going to remember my friend that isn't 'around' anymore *tear drops on keyboard*
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- luvd_n_forgotten - 01/10/2010
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Imm sorwi about yur loss
I hope making this poem lets yur feelings out..
Sorwi again...
Myab yu still have a chance of anothr sibling..
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- XxKitty_of_DeathxX - 01/06/2010
- aww thats so sad im so sorry i would have had a older sister and brother accept that i wouldnt have been born if my sister would have been so i know how it feels in a way but im so sorry for your loss
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- Zaryra - 01/05/2010
- nice & short-i like the "red on white, white on red" blood on a child, a child lying in blood
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- AsianFanatic - 01/05/2010
- im sorry....
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