Sick and Tired

• Artist: The Schietzophrenic
• Description: Hope ya like it... I'm not emo by the way!!
• Date: 01/27/2010
• Tags: sick tired

Sick
Sick and tired
Hurt
Hurt and dying

Waiting for the peace
That will never come

Lies
Lies and unkept promises
Down
Down and depressed

All that pain
Nowhere to go

Suppressed
Suppressed and ignored

All those people dying
Nothing anybody does about it
Help them
Somebody

Notice them
Their pain
Their suffering
Do something

Comments

[Echo Ligeia]

I though your repetition was very reflective of the subject matter. It impressed upon the reader the feeling of these words - these emotions - just racing around your head. You can't think of anything else; you can't feel anything else.
And I don't think it takes an emo to understand this poem ^.^. I've felt the same things.
Good Work

[Radioactive Dreams]

I really like how you structured this ^.^ the word, then it again with a little more. Very well done. 5/5