I'll never forget....

• Artist: Intemi
• Description: It is one of those annoyingly repeated phrase....
  Please beware that this is NOT a true story...
  I just made it up in school! <33
• Date: 02/04/2010
• Tags: love

I'll never forget the love....
I had love you with all my might
I'll never forget the kiss....
your kiss...that sends me free
I'll never forget the memory....
the memory still lingers
I'll never forget the day....
of that old faithful day
I'll never forget the moment....
the moment i heard...
I'll never forget how it feels like to have a broken heart...
my heart had shattered

My love for you
Is as strong as ever
Left behind
Traces of anger
The tears had started
My love....disjointed

Comments

[Intemi]

Oh...ok..Thanks for your advice! ;3

[Yureiaa Hearts]

It's very cliche.
You should study up some more expressive words.
A lot of words you use can be juiced up with much more emotional,
but not overused, words.
I think you'd do well in an AP English composition course.