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Zip through life like a fly
Trip up and die
Going on wondering why?
Yet did you try to understand?
Comprehending
Pretending to care for anything
You’re reflection
Just a connection
To the collection of nothing
Looking around wearing you’re crown
Then looking down as you frown
Its because you’ve lost your will
Unable to thrill
Incomplete with no emotion
- by The Xilent One |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/11/2010 |
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- Title: No body
- Artist: The Xilent One
- Description: this was a poem about how people can be left with nothing
- Date: 02/11/2010
- Tags: bodyempty
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Brittany Weaver - 04/24/2010
- sounds sort of like my life
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- nbetweener - 02/22/2010
- Sounds more like people feel nothing than are left with nothing. It's short fast and raplike. If you did more with the fly thing, you could have a short zippy poem that helped the fly-like feel even more; short lifespan of poem matching the zippy quick halflife these people go through.
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- Kurokawa Haru - 02/21/2010
- that's really great biggrin
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