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As I lie here awake
I wonder why you did what you did,
Whether us together was a mistake,
If you even loved me just as you said.
I knew this would happen
So I still wonder why
I am still by your side when
I revealed those hopeless lies.
The three words I never heard
I thought I would, could feel
But my eyes were just blurred
By your meaningless words and actions so unreal.
I trusted you enough
To let my feelings through
'Til I saw through your empty love
'Til I heard words so untrue.
Now I have no love left to give
I thought there was no longer a reason to live
'Til I found out that you and I can survive not being by each other's side.
There's nothing more that you need to hide.
Though I still believe
This time was different from before
The memories I will always keep
Deep inside my heart's locked door.
So I thought that you should know the truth
I'm still trying to get over you.
- by oX-silent-rose-Xo |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/20/2010 |
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- Title: Trying to Get Over You
- Artist: oX-silent-rose-Xo
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Hey guys I'm back.
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Anyway, I just got dumped so I wrote this because I thought, well my feelings gotta go somewhere right? Please tell me what you think. - Date: 02/20/2010
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Comments (2 Comments)
- oX-silent-rose-Xo - 05/10/2010
- omg thank you so much. i really appreciate iht. i know im kinda late, haven`t been on for ages, but i just wanted 2 thank u :] so thanx again :]
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- 290DarkStars - 02/22/2010
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As the first one to tell you what you did in my heart... in my mind. I tell you that you did an amazing job. a good ABAB pattern and stanza hold. Im not one to be Critical on the rythem of a poem, though its good to have. You did exelent, the meaning came through grat and it flowed like water. Did awesome, and sorry for your loss.
I feel ya.
-Dark.
P.S.- 5/5 and much deserved. - Report As Spam