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You entered her life, you took her away
We didn't notice the signs, our reactions delayed
You hit and you punched her, she hurt and she cried
Its all your fault the way that she died
Her hurt and her pain, it became all too much
You caused her to do it, she was so out of touch
She waited for you to leave, she lifted the knife
It was pressed to her neck, she took her broken life
Our friend and our daughter, our child and our love
You took her from us, now she sits above
No matter how bad, no matter how long
That cell with no windows, the prison is where you belong...
- by nadinerater |
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- | Submitted on 02/22/2010 |
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- Title: You took her
- Artist: nadinerater
- Description: Thousands of people everyday are abused by ones they think love them; abusive relationships are not excusable. In many cases the problem gets so bad that the victim feels that they cannot escape. Its a terrible loss for an innocent party to feel the need to take their own life so to escape the torment another forces apon them. Some are more vunerable than others not strong enough to withstand it... these poor people are open to such attacks.
- Date: 02/22/2010
- Tags: youtookher death abuse
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Comments (2 Comments)
- nadinerater - 08/10/2010
- Thanks for you interest, and yeah it puts alot of strain on you willingness to continue and the life of another can keep you going on
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- fua-fuwa - 03/04/2010
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o.o...thats deep~.....
~my friend was one of those kinds of people. Her boyfriend beat her a lot~. But the night that she was going to kill herself, she found out that she was pregnant. So i know what you mean about the whole abusive relationships~ keep writing tho~ i like this poem~ ^^ - Report As Spam
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