Stop the Stugglin

• Artist: -VSF-Gaara
• Description: My friend DJMaggottheory, a remixer on youtube, and i wrote this song
• Date: 02/22/2010
• Tags: stop stugglin

(Chorus)

(Stop the strugglin.
It’s time to go.
Stop the strugglin.
The pain is all you know.)

Someone help me,
My noose is too tight.
Someone save me,
The light is too bright.

I’ve made a mistake,
And now I’m here swingin.
I need to awake.
I cant even breathe in.

Now this is it.
How I chose to go.
I never amounted to s**t.
Will they care? Hell, I don’t know.

(Stop the strugglin.
It’s time to go.
Stop the strugglin.
The pain is all you know.)

I left this world;
There’s no turnin back.
Time you’d made peace
With what id lack.

You were never there to hold me.
You were only there to scold.
What I wanted be never got to be.
Instead, you just molded me.
I was a product of what you wanted to see.

(Stop the strugglin.
It’s time to go.
Stop the strugglin.
The pain is all you know.)

Now I’m complete and
Your on the ground, beat.
Blood is everywhere.
It should be a scare, but
I can’t help but to just stare…
And laugh.

(Stop the strugglin.
It’s time to go.
Stop the strugglin.
The pain is all you know.)

Comments

[blonde_hobbit]

it's intraesting and a little weird dut just a little i liked it

[-VSF-Gaara]

spelling errors were intended

[nbetweener]

It sounds like there's a story here, and we're only getting maybe a half of it. How'd you get down from the rope? and should the chorus be unchanged after you obviously decide to not only keep struggling, but win through? A little grammar and spelling fix up wouldn't hurt either, since you obviously expect others to read it.