Teardrops

• Artist: Ayla_Warrior_Of_Pain
• Description: is something i wrote for the first time i cried for love and first time i lost my heart.
• Date: 02/23/2010
• Tags: tear drop

Teardrop
Sadness is as Blue as a teardrop of rain
No matter how cold they lay
All a lone in pain.
A tear is shed for every teardrop that lay
All a lone on a cold winter day
Not to be lost by each painful night
But to be loved by each coming day
Not lost or afraid
But loved.

By Ayla Beltran <3
July 31,2009

crying

Comments

[Decaffeination]

I like how you half-rhyme only when possible, rather than fitting the poem's story around rhyming. *thumbs up*. I can't really fault it at all actually; it's not a stunner of a poem, but definately above average in my opinion.

[cRasH tHis pArTy]

beautiful