Beloved

• Artist: fufufufufu50
• Description: i wrote this for my ex named Chari, she then broke up with me the day after i wrote this.
• Date: 03/05/2010
• Tags: beloved

I remember when,
Our eyes first met,
I saw your smile,
And my heart was set.

Your smile is like,
The brightest star,
Easy to spot,
From afar.

Your beauty is,
A breath-taking view.
Like everest, the grand canyon,
And niagra falls too.

When were together,
No one else around,
It feels like my feet,
Have left the ground.

When I gaze in your eyes,
I know you'll be true,
And I'll be there for you,
Through and through.

My love's in this poem,
And I hope you see,
You're the only one,
You are mon chari.

Comments

[Death Of The Killer]

This poem is beeeeeeeeeeeee-autiful. biggrin

[Silvia135]

This is really a very beautiful poem. Honestly. But a small mistake you is undermined: In the last line of the third verse you wrote "Niagra Falls" instead of "Niagarafalls" .

[nikkidawn1997]

thnx for the comment on my poem...i really like yours...maybe we can work together on some poems some day...

[liljaybs96]

dat is so sad