Love for You

• Artist: DoctorWho-Lover123
• Description: A poem I wrote one day thinking about my good friends
• Date: 03/21/2010
• Tags: love poem

My love for you is like a roller coaster,
It has it's ups and downs.
You make me smile, you make me laugh,
But when you're gone I'm all frowns.

My love for you is like a water fall,
It sprinkles all around,
You are always surrounding me,
I think I just might drown.

My love for you is like a super hero,
One that's lost it's "Pow!"
You are never, ever around me,
I am always, always down.

Comments

[iiEatChurBrains]

I love it, but in the first line you might want to fix it, you forgot the word :"for" just saying. =)