Napalm

• Artist: 0rphelia
• Description: Ahh war poem..
  I am antiwar Dx
  And i find this poem i wrote very descriptive on the Vietnam war.
  Towards the end I am not siding with one, cause each soldier in each war has given up their life
  to defend there country. they all fought hard and proudly, and they deserve the recognition
  I am proud of these soldiers.
  Fr defending what they believe in (even if they do wanna kill the Americans) Lol
• Date: 04/09/2010
• Tags: napalm

Ingulfed in napalm
Bodies gone from flesh to bone
Over half the city deteriorated
From the blood thirsty gasoline bombs
women and children cry for the loss
Of angry soldiers who were mended in battle
Now the war has ended and everyone gone
The survivors are anemic but still stayed strong
for the next hostility that comes to them
and every soldier fought for victory
For their beloved country

Comments

[Unintended Desires]

Not sure if you meant to have a rhyme scheme but if you did it could be a little more consistent...but other than that, this is a really excellent poem XD

[Top Tier Monkey]

Recheck over some words you messed up on. . . ^_^ Other then that good.