love lasts

• Artist: me_you_4ever
• Description: just somthing i rote after me and my x bf broke up idk if its any good so rate me accordingly
• Date: 04/17/2010
• Tags: love lasts relationships

love lasts
4 ever in a life time
1ce in a relationship
never in an empty heart
never give up on love and it wont give up on you
dont be the empty heart everyone sees
and for 1nce youll have
love 4ever in your
relationship that lasts a life time!!! heart heart heart

Comments

[me_you_4ever]

yes, i know i was shy in this poem this is one of my first and thank you for the tip

[Faerie]

Please use full words and not numbers.
That messes up the piece and makes it look unprofessional.
We all know a lot about love, but you have to put more emphasize on it, add more detail and bring it out! Don't be shy to either.
Put feelings into your work smile