Can You Hear Eternity?

• Artist: john_the_kitty
• Description: This is my *very lame* attempt at writing a Haiku. In most forms of Haiku, each poem contains 17 syllables separated over 3 lines in the form of {5,7,5}, but I tried to do a variant, in which there's 19 syllables, {7,5,7} and then another Haiku with the reverse {5,7,5} ... ehhhhh forget it >.< I suck at explaining stuff, so just enjoy please :) and rate...and comment... =^-^=
  
  
  This is also on my deviantart acc.
  http://haku1092.deviantart.com/
• Date: 06/22/2010
• Tags: hear eternity

heart Can You Hear Eternity?
Singing to the breeze?
Singing on about the sky…

Can You Hear The Wind?
Breathing life into all things
Without saying “hi”

Can You Hear The Water Now?
It’s letting you drink,
And sigh, safely from a drought

Can You Hear The Earth?
Growing beneath your very feet,
The weight…crushing blooms

Can You Hear Your Own Spirit?
Running to a tree
Running…towards eternity.