How I feel

• Artist: Lanna-Bearz
• Description:
• Date: 07/03/2010
• Tags: feel

If only you could hear what I was thinking
then you would know,
the loving feeling that seems to grow.

When I'm alone
I feel so blue,
When your around
My love is so true.

But when you left that sad, sad day
I never truly got to say
how much I really loved you
And again I start to feel blue.

I wait and wait for someone new
But no one could ever compare to you.
I wish I had the guts before
to tell you how I felt
But when I come near you
I would start to melt.

I was too shy to tell you
How I really feel
My heart was so burnt
and now it is starting to peal.

If only you could hear what I was thinking
that way you would know
how I really love you so.

Comments

[jth12550]

I like the poem, I like the emotion behind it, but your rhyme pattern is really unstable and the rhyth changes alot. But all-in-all a good poem.