Thorns

• Artist: S T E E L S O U N D
• Description:
• Date: 07/04/2010
• Tags: thorns

Ƭнσяиƨ:
Ѧι∂иιɢнт Ɯαʏ

Ƭσ σиcɛ α вɛαʋтιғʋℓ ғℓσωɛя ωαƨ вσяи,
ωιтн вℓσσ∂-ℓικɛ ρɛтαℓƨ αи∂ вℓα∂ɛ-ℓικɛ тнσяиƨ
вʋт ωнɛи тнɛ ғℓσωɛя нαƨ ℓσƨт тнɛ ƨιɢнт,
σғ тнɛ ƨιℓʌɛяʏ мσσи αи∂ тнɛ ƨтαяƨ αт иιɢнт
α вℓσσ∂-ℓικɛ ρɛтαℓ αи∂ нɛαятвяɛακ ƨнαℓℓ ғαℓℓ,
α яαιи∂яσρ σғ ∂ɛω αи∂ тнɛ ƨιɢнт σғ тнɛм αℓℓ
∂ɛƨcɛи∂ɛ∂ αƨ мσяɛ σғ тнɛ ρɛтαℓƨ αяɛ ℓσƨт,
ƨняιиκιиɢ αи∂ ғяɛɛʓιиɢ ιи тнɛ ɢяιρ σғ тнɛ ғяσƨт
Δи∂ иσω тнɛ ғℓσωɛя нαƨ вɛɢʋи тσ яιƨɛ,
тнɛ σтнɛяƨ ƨнαℓℓ ƨɛɛ ιт ωιтн ʝɛαℓσʋƨ ɛʏɛƨ
Ѳиɛ ƨмαℓℓ ғαιтн нαƨ ρʋƨнɛ∂ ιт тσ ƨнιиɛ,
тнɛ нσρɛ σғ αиσтнɛя нαƨ κɛρт ιт αℓιʌɛ.

Comments

[dfsgfbsgbdfgsfgergergerg]

Very creative - - The rhyming adds character to the poem in which you can truly see the personality that you as the author has for such a flower. This poem also makes me wonder whether or not the flower is a metaphorical one, for say or rather an actual flower. Other than that, it is truly a good piece of writing. Good job.

[Mr Clocksy]

wow this poem is beautiful. u must have a gift for words themselves, ^.^