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As the world draws near
Race against time becomes a fear
May the human race fall on its feet
And experience the end in which to meet
Gather up and meet your fate
Each person has their doom up to date
Day of the world's end
Draws close, your visions shall soon bend
Over the top, the human race will fall
No person left will be surviving in this world overall.
- by Mario the Davidic Hero |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/12/2010 |
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- Title: Armageddon
- Artist: Mario the Davidic Hero
- Description: Another acrostic in which I came up with. This reflects on my thoughts on what would happen if the world were to end, leaving the whole human race annihilated. Enjoy!
- Date: 07/12/2010
- Tags: armageddon
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Comments (7 Comments)
- EmmyMurphy - 10/29/2010
- excellent acrostic! keep it up!
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- Shamyrie - 07/14/2010
- This is very serious, and one of your more somber poems. I love it. It is really serious and the rhyming is great. I think it is your best so far! Five stars!
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- PoodiePie - 07/13/2010
- Scary. It provides so many powerful images. My favorite line is "Over the top, the human race will fall" for it gives me the image of humans over shooting the top of a mountain and soaring for a brief moment... then crashing.
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- The Blonde Sally - 07/13/2010
- great acrostic! smile keep it up! ^^
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- SentryDefiant - 07/12/2010
- Oh my friend....mankind. If we could only get our act together. It's times like these I think of the quote..."Sometimes...I can't help but think to myself...there's no place worse than this planet...it's horrible here." Great job man. I love it when you show your serious side. Beautiful. 5 stars.
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- Kaiieda - 07/12/2010
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I had no idea you were that good!
Keep it up!111 - Report As Spam
- Evalinna - 07/12/2010
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nice 5/5
well 2012 is upon us
the world will be in such a fuss
lets see what becomes of us - Report As Spam
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