alOne

• Artist: Jaszmine802
• Description: ... Well this poetry or poem if you whatever you like to call it is called Alone .
  If you would like for me to do another one jusst tell me because i have lots more on the way . (From me to you) , (Why?) ,and etc .
• Date: 07/26/2010
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I feel alOne in the dark .
Like i'am abOut tO step Off the biggest ark .
I can't never be alOne .
But they still try kicking me Out Of the zOne .
I wanna be adOpted sO very bad .
That people these days make me very sad .
DO i have tO hurt myself tO get your attentiOn .
Or dO i have to hide undergrOund .
Why can't yOu see that the tears that i shed are nOt the tears Of jOy .
I wish i was gone .
Because it makes me sad to sigh by myself .
I hate to tell yOu yOur nOt in my head .
As i gO tO sleep in my bed .

Comments

[sarafina_star13]

I personally loved the meaning, I do believe you have great potential as a poet, just have more confidence in your skill, I can feel low confidence as I read this. Other than that, 4/5 stars!!!!!