Haiku #2

• Artist: cuttlefishCuIIer
• Description: Yet another Haiku
• Date: 08/08/2010
• Tags: haiku

Soulful music flows
Inspires my emotions
Bringing inner peace

Comments

[cuttlefishCuIIer]

a haiku doesn't have to be about nature but some are
it's a poem where the first line is 5 syllable, second is 7, and the third is 5

[2pound]

this isn't a haiku; haiku are about nature; you have written a senryu. nice try. you get a one because the poem is quite boring and abstract. how does soulful music bring about inner peace? it should bring out sad blues, right? that's why you get a one.

[cuttlefishCuIIer]

sad but true

[sora wonk]

that's chill. don't hear much happiness these days biggrin