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The Sorrows of all the Years
The dark night sky,
A pillow stained with tears,
The cold bitter wind,
Are the sorrows of all the years.
The dying rose,
Midnight fears,
The pain of it all,
Are the sorrows of all the years.
A voice that sings,
Open your ears,
Such sadness and woe,
“The sorrows of all the years.”
- by 1DAKOTA SMITH1 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/10/2010 |
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- Title: The Sorrows of all the Years
- Artist: 1DAKOTA SMITH1
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ok so like all of (and the very few of for that matter) my writeing is spure of the moment stuff and i really want to get some feed back on this one so PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!
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sorry for any spelling errors i may have overlooked in both the poem and my description here (there i have said it so no need for you to go to the trouble of pointing it out) thanks ^_^ - Date: 08/10/2010
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- EmoSno - 09/04/2010
- WOW ITS BEUTIFUL I LIKE TEW WRITE TEW I GONNA WRITE SOMTHIN!!!!
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- 1DAKOTA SMITH1 - 08/15/2010
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