Sakura Blooms

• Artist: Clumsy Mafia Boss
• Description: the flower sakura blooming
• Date: 08/12/2010
• Tags: sakura blooms

Sakura's bloom tonight
Under the full moon shining bright
With a happy look on its face
Smiling at the sakura's
Sakura's bloom until they are pretty and look at the moon

Comments

[Clumsy Mafia Boss]

i'll try

[LikesCake]

Cherry blossoms in full bloom under the pale moonlight are in fact beautiful, but your poem needs a little bit more description to get that idea across. Cute story though, keep it up!