alive

• Artist: runescape_freak711
• Description: this is a poem about me and a friend who use to "date" so after we broke up it was weird...
  but this peom is about remembering the way it use to be but getting over it and becoming friends again.
  
  please rate and comment!?
  thanks for the comments!! =D =D
  
• Date: 08/19/2010
• Tags: alive

Old friendship come back to life,
close your eyes and hold on tight.
Look and see how it use to be,
but those are just memorys to me.

Old dreams fade away,
and new ones come and take there place.
We talk about what colors the world should be,
and I remember "you and me".

Old memorys come and go,
and we walk against the flow.
we make each other laugh,we make each other cry,
we make each other feel alive.

Comments

[runescape_freak711]

=D

[Clare13tube]

I loved the poem!

[runescape_freak711]

thanks alexandra.i redid the spelling with some one who can spell.thanks for the comments they mean a lot to me =D

[Chamomile Dream]

It's a lovely poem, however, there's a few mistakes. The letter I should always be capitalized. There's also quite a few spelling errors, but I suppose you wouldn't really care for me to go through pointing them all out, as you have already admitted to poor spelling. Try using a programme with spell-check next time.

The emotional content, however, is superb.

[runescape_freak711]

thank you and im sorry about the spelling

[CaronSscott]

it's sweet.