Cry

• Artist: Cant touch Kit
• Description: It's a poem on how I feel about this stupid situation in the house...it saddens me and makes me wanna cry, it's because my cousin is tearing us apart...
• Date: 08/27/2010
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Don't I have the right to cry?
You always asking me why.
You're blinding on how I feel,
when I see you, her and ya'll thrill.
You're never happy with just me,
You're youngest daughter,
You happy with someone else,
a nuisance, a bother.
The same thing happened with you're sister-in-law,
But the situation is happing here,
yet, you're blinded by it all,
I pray that God will open your eyes so that you can see,
That you're pushing me.
Don't I have the right to cry?
For I just don't understand why,
why do you care about her,
More than you do your own family?

Comments

[Cant touch Kit]

Thanks and thanks for he advice I wrote this about a year ago so yeah that's probably why lol but still thanks

[Cookie_Booger]

This is good that it came from the heart. :]
Anyway, speaking poem wise, now: you need to have the rhyming consistent. It's also good that you kept the punctuation consistent too.
I just got a bit confused with the family, sister-in-law, girlfriend brother parts.

[sora wonk]

Wow, that sounds terrible. Hopefully things have improved.
Nice poem anyhoo.