Cold

• Artist: dbz_lalala
• Description: an intense poem
• Date: 09/16/2010
• Tags: cold numb intense poetry

Then more I shake,
the more I'm giving away,
the fire inside freezes over,
the numbing takes over,
this is the new flesh,
cold harden skin,
I step in front to see the,
impossibilities,
fracture inside,
hiding behind shadows,
I've torn apart,
not able to pick up the pieces,
why I am so tired,
going around in circles,
isn't helping,
holding on by a small twig,
not being able to do anything

Comments

[dbz_lalala]

thanks ><, yea its more into it then just cold

[Crystal_onel]

i really like this alot, but i dont really get it :/ im sure its more than just being cold tho. i really like the way its written and the words ect. 5 star! smile