Canvas

• Artist: tear goddess
• Description: This would be the arty side of me coming out in the wordy side of me.
  Weird.
  Hope you like it. =)
  Again, tell me whats good/bad. Please and thankyou. =)
  Love you all.=)
• Date: 10/04/2010
• Tags: canvas

Canvas
A canvas full of nothing
full of white
full of empty
A paint tin full of everything
full of colour
full of vibrance
The paintbrush there to transport
all the beauty
all the light
My hand there to guide it
there to hold it
there to make it
The slilence heard to soothe
heard to settle
heard to calm
The sunlight pours to bathe you
pours to touch you
pours to wrap you
The silk here to slither
here to embrace
here to cover
Your bare skin seen to enlighten
seen for grace
seen for sense
My eyes take you in
soak your image
breath it up
A canvas full of paint
full of colour
full of you

Comments

[Anyuiitte]

Your word choice is euphonious and precise. Additionally, you make great use of repetition. This serves to create a sense of unity. There is also an abundance of sensual imagery. Your poem evokes feelings of a lover's embrace and soft caresses. Peace, trust, and comfort are the emotions I feel dominate this poem. Great job!

[tear goddess]

Thank you very much for your comments! It means a lot to me!! =D

[rainbowryda]

i could picture everything as i would reading this, very detailed smile