Today, Yesterday, Tomorrow.

• Artist: willowjay
• Description: If you rate, please tell my why you gave me what you did. I would love suggestions to make this and my writing in general better. Thank you. :)
• Date: 11/08/2010
• Tags: today yesterday tomorrow

I know what each day brings
It will be the same as tomorrow
the same as yesterday
it takes away my heart and will
wishing it could some how change
and be different than tomorrow.

Comments

[xXhopeless_romantic14xX]

it's really good.i gave you a 4/5.but i don't know it seems you stopped to soon and went back to the beginning which isn't bad.but it kinda just leaves a person in the dust.i think if it's going to be short try to put more heart in it.use stronger words or make it longer.