through eyes, a Rose.

• Artist: patchwork ace
• Description: RATE AND COMMENT, please? :3
  A short poem about... well... I don't like talking about the meaning of my poems because I like each reader to create their own interpretations, based on their views.
  However, the unorthodox use of capitals was intentional! ~~PLEASE REMEMBER THAT!
  
  I hope you like it. >w<
• Date: 01/01/2011
• Tags: through eyes rose

here kneels a Rose.
too timid to stand, too proud to lie.
only a dusty red is she. tall?
no.
but who wants a tall rose? they have more thorns.

here becomes a Rose,
moreso a dandelion in her spirit.
pretty? too big a word. beautiful?
too small.
cower, Rose. jealousy would have you a target.

a Rose,
ripe in birdsong.
the day breath was lost was the day i began watching you through these jewels.

Comments

[Archangel_X1]

I love it! The only criticism I have is that it should have been formatted differently but lets ignore that and give you a 5/5! If you want to know my interpretation pm me wink

[miss-pop-n-fresh]

Breathtaking, sincere and heartfelt. A truely stunning poem. I like it a lot. Thank you. ;3