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The doors open
The lights dim
She walks in
Proud and content
She sees him
Across the floor
She struts
Over to him
The dance begins
They twirl
Her red dress
Swishing and swaying
His tie
Tied messy
He doesn't care
Neither does she
They move
As if time
Has stopped
And no one's there
The clock strikes12:00
And no one notices
When her gown
Turns back into rags
She closes her eyes
Turns around
And fades into the crowd
Never to be seen again.
- by Witch Cr0wnd Queen |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 01/11/2011 |
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- Title: Last Dance
- Artist: Witch Cr0wnd Queen
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Description:
This was inspired by two things:
1) The ball scene in Thomas Crown Affair
2) The song "Last Dance" by the Raveneottes
- Date: 01/11/2011
- Tags: last dance
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Primrose Petals - 01/17/2011
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Ehhh its not bad but not good either,i mean you had great inspirations but some parts to me just dont seem to fit like "His tie
Tied messy
He doesn't care
Neither does she" I just dont rlly feel as if it fits
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