You Let Me Fall

• Artist: Natural Jane
• Description: Just something I wrote when my best friend.. well... yeah... Read it.. I'm tired of talking about it. T_T
• Date: 04/22/2011
• Tags: friends alone depression anger loss

A best friend is someone
Who Know's you better than you do
That care's and would never leave
With a loyal pashinet soul
Who puts you before themselves
That's ready to give advice
They're your'e shoulder to cry on
That will accept all of you

But you were'nt always there
Even when I needed you
When you were the only one I could trust
You let me fall

Even after I
Helped you
Defended you
Cared about you
Cried for you
protected you
Was loyal to you

I never left your'e side

You dropped me
And wached me fall

Comments

[il Little Bridges il]

Hmm, i like it. personally i can relate to some of the emotion you've put behind this.Too many people focus on the writing itself and ignore the meaning and emotion the author intended. A little hint, although grammar isn't such a big deal, try to use a spell check and look for synonyms and antonyms To make a more dramatic appeal~ p.s thank you for commenting on my art<3