Time

• Artist: Gothique Jedi
• Description:
• Date: 05/26/2011
• Tags: time

Time is an elusive concept.
It's woven of an illusory thread.
Time is something to percept,
and is undoubtedly widespread.

The fabric of time is an interesting one.
It cannot be seen or held,
nor can it lose or have won.
And yet, we are under its spell.

The tapestry time wears across.
It weaves on forever and never fades,
nor is ever lost to chaos.
It is immaterial like the shade.

Never beginning.
Never ending.
Never fading.
Never feeling.
Never leaving.

Comments

[UntilTomorrow08]

writing about an abstract idea such as time is very difficult, but you've got a great start. I love the ending and I'm curious to see how you came to feel that way. Don't be afraid to make this poem personal, sometimes doing so is difficult but in the end it'll be worth all the effort