thoughts of stuff

• Artist: huntedxangel
• Description: this is a compilation of what was running through my head. I tried to sort it out as best as I could.
• Date: 06/02/2011
• Tags: thoughts stuff

secrets kept
locked away
deep in maze of your mind

hidden away forgotten
in the chambers of your heart
my broken heart cries
my lonely soul dies
and longs to be free
~(these are two separate ideas)
angels in white
are taking their flight
shedding their bonded chains

and slowly they flew
to places anew
away from this pain
and music regains
it's place in their hearts.
~
with secrets kept
and tears unwept
the memories still linger
of people and places gone by
my memories still fresh
I lock them away
deep in the recess of my heart
forever they will stay
until my heart is healed
cry
yeah i know it doesn't make much sense but I couldnt figure out how to fit them together

Comments

[Kebin13]

No one can get it right all the time, with the pieces that you have so far I think you can make it work smile BUT in it's current state it isn't very good. Also adding some capital letters would help and don't add your own notes in the middle of the poem. Put your opinion in the description box or comment on your own work smile