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Death, do you fear what we have?
If you do I would not dare to blame you.
For what greater punishment is there then to live?
Living your days through in emotions that do nothing but cloud
Eyes and judgment on endless decisions.
Having a heart, is it a good thing or bad?
It puts you in the line to get hurt with greater ease,
But with no heart then how can you feel the beauty of joy?
Pain, the thing that is supposed to make us stronger.
But if there is no pain then would there be a need to strength?
In death there is so much certainty.
Being alive and not knowing death is where the uncertainty lies.
Is that all that we're afraid of? The uncertainty of things,
Of change?
People weep and cry when a loved one dies but why?
Because they left your life? How selfish of a reason.
They no longer have to live in pain, no longer have to
Live in uncertainty. Death appears as an endless vacation.
So does death fear life as life fears death?
An endless entagnlement that bickers back and forth.
An endless war just waiting to vanquish the other?
Fear, what is it to you?
- Title: Fear
- Artist: Husk3
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Description:
My thoughts were kind of jumbled, I believe it all fits in the same area. Death, Fear, Pain, Life... so please keep that in mind.
I don't think this is one of my better writings and you might not even mark it as poetry but it didn't fit in to the other categories and I was curious about other people's views.
so please comment and send me a pm too. especially if you really thought about this. - Date: 07/01/2011
- Tags: fear pain death life living
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Comments (3 Comments)
- 0DD_S3X - 08/30/2011
- Personally, i found this rlli amazing. you said your thoughts were jumbled but the way you wrote out those thoughts leads the reader beautifully into the heart of what your saying, because your poem is so true, we do fear death because we dont know or understand completely whereas when your dead...what else is there to fear? simply put: Beautiful smile
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- headphonez on ur heart - 07/19/2011
- its rlly good :J
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