What I Love About You...

• Artist: agent_lexy_doll_009
• Description: a cute little poem i wrote about a friend i secretly crush on, unfortunately he hase a girl friend! :(
  But the cool thing is, our personalities are shown with the class we're in (two different classes in the same period/class) I'm in newspaper and he's in yearbook ^w^, a match made in heaven!
• Date: 12/19/2012
• Tags: love friends yearbook newspaper

I love the way you wave at me,
When I walk into class.
I love the way you sit with me,
When I work on the computers.
I love the way we tease each other,
And get into playful fights.
I love the way your hair feels,
And looks draping over your head.
I love the way you wear your jacket,
And the way it looks on you.
I love the way we have poke wars,
Even when you win them.
I love the way your cologne smells,
When it clings to me after a "war"
I love the way your face lights up,
And looks when I tell a silly joke.
I love you the way that you love me,
The way I can just be me.

Comments

[NihilistX]

Thank you for sharing this, I hope things work out for the best. And the repetition here definitely works in your favor but I would try to pay more mind to its flow, the syllables dont compliment eachother in the writing which is important.

[opqurster14]

So cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! B-)