Who I am

[Snicketfile2014]

I am not
like the wolf praising the moon,
like the vampire craving blood,
like the guilty man pleading innocents,
like the madman claiming sanity,
like the disease that is uncontrolled,
like the enemy who surrendered
I do not give praise as willingly as the wolf,
I do not crave as the vampire does,
I do not plea my innocents like the guilty,
I do not claim to be as the madman does,
I do not let myself be controlled as the disease eventually will,
I do not surrender as many before me have.
And this makes me your enemy
Stronger than you are lead to believe
Fear it
Fight it
Either way, you will lose
And it will not change me.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it is very well in depth details. it tells how you feel when you were betrayed by a guy and you don't need him anymore. That your better than him and your stronger with out him. i like it very much.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

plus it saying that you can't force someone to change you because you are who you are and that what's really important  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

very poetic in detail sort like Hamlet's line in Shakespeare  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it is very well in depth and very good  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

it very well detail and sort looks like the person is confused and don't know who they really are.  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

very deep and very intense hopeful more will come i hope so 4laugh and very alive feeling  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

wow great job very good. hopefully more will come and yah burning_eyes great work keep it up  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

wow really good and great job on it and etc ninja keep it up and yeah idea hope the new poem will be fun  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

wow great job hopefully things will be okay and yeah hope things are well and so on  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

hope you can write more into your stories can't for it and so on and yeah hope things are well and yeah mrgreen  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

very well detail and where is this coming from? it very well written and how it descripted  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

very well written and etc and some very creative look and how mad is is and yeah  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

very well good and how very detail and so on and wow good job and yeah mrgreen very good and hoping more as soon  

[Nana Shinu Ai]

very well capturing and very lengthy and etc cant wait for more from you