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killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw she has her own reasons dont badger her about them her reasons are her own and you need to respect her decision, you cant force her no matter how hard you try, to take wolfs rendition of the saying, you can lead a horse to water but if you try to force it to drink when it doesnt want to expect to fall into the water and have a nice hoof shaped bruise and yea tommarow we can figure out something goodnight ((I suppose you're right. As I stated earlier, I have a nasty habit of badgering. Its ticked off my brother on more then one occasion.)) well just back off if snow says no then leave it at that ok? you cant control her and she can make her own decisions if she wanted someones openion of whether she should be the goddess still or not she wuld have asked for it so give her space cause next time she goes for you with knivea im not holding her back or attempting to calm her, if it gets that bad again you two can work thing out urselves and i would bet that snow would end up winning and u'd just waist ur breath on a pointless argument that results in nothing more then annoying you both and getting you angry with each other and then people will choose sides and then the sides will go to war in which many cuss words and profanities are thrown around then a huge battlish scene that result in one of you and some of ur annoyed followers leaving the guild and then others who stay will be sad because one or many of you are gone and then we are missing many key characters then pandomonium breaks out causing mass panic and the ultimate anihalation of blood moon through confusion and anger that all started over a small argument that could easily have been resolved if you hadnt been so demanding and tried to compromise ((I'm sorry.........I don't want things to go that far. All I really want is to salvage Alena's personality and continuity at the end of this.)) just because she doesnt correct one thing doesnt change her entire personal, she made a mistake, she should get over it, mitsuki isnt coming bakc like snow already said so theres no point in getting her her memories because then snow would have to bring mitsuki back in and she doesnt want to do that, its better of she doesnt remember i can even erase serophs memories of her from when he was in the coma that way it wont matter to him either if i feel like keeping him around, so forget the goddess and mitsuki and trying to salvage her personality that was never ruined in the first place because it was mitsukis own choice to save alena and it puts her effort in vein to send alena into danger where she may very well die and lose the spared life mitsuki risked her memories to get for her and then she would accomplish nothing so its selfish to allow her into that risky situation when mitsuki is perfectly fine where she is and is ecactly where snow desires her to stay, if she wants to bring her back that can be done later with a few ajustment because writing and figuring out problems and things like this so they make logical since is wat i plan to do for a living because im gonna be a writer so back off her and return alena back to the school and let her live the life her friend cared enough to give her while giving up something of importance to her ok?
There are but a few problems with this. 1. Mitsuki is the Goddess of Sadness and Lonleyness. This ticks Alena off. 2. No one has said anything that would defer Alena from going there. 3. Its Alena's fault that Mitsuki is memory-less. 4. Alena owes Mitsuki her life. 5. Alena is rash and reckless, and would probably go anyway.
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:28 am
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Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw she has her own reasons dont badger her about them her reasons are her own and you need to respect her decision, you cant force her no matter how hard you try, to take wolfs rendition of the saying, you can lead a horse to water but if you try to force it to drink when it doesnt want to expect to fall into the water and have a nice hoof shaped bruise and yea tommarow we can figure out something goodnight ((I suppose you're right. As I stated earlier, I have a nasty habit of badgering. Its ticked off my brother on more then one occasion.)) well just back off if snow says no then leave it at that ok? you cant control her and she can make her own decisions if she wanted someones openion of whether she should be the goddess still or not she wuld have asked for it so give her space cause next time she goes for you with knivea im not holding her back or attempting to calm her, if it gets that bad again you two can work thing out urselves and i would bet that snow would end up winning and u'd just waist ur breath on a pointless argument that results in nothing more then annoying you both and getting you angry with each other and then people will choose sides and then the sides will go to war in which many cuss words and profanities are thrown around then a huge battlish scene that result in one of you and some of ur annoyed followers leaving the guild and then others who stay will be sad because one or many of you are gone and then we are missing many key characters then pandomonium breaks out causing mass panic and the ultimate anihalation of blood moon through confusion and anger that all started over a small argument that could easily have been resolved if you hadnt been so demanding and tried to compromise ((I'm sorry.........I don't want things to go that far. All I really want is to salvage Alena's personality and continuity at the end of this.)) just because she doesnt correct one thing doesnt change her entire personal, she made a mistake, she should get over it, mitsuki isnt coming bakc like snow already said so theres no point in getting her her memories because then snow would have to bring mitsuki back in and she doesnt want to do that, its better of she doesnt remember i can even erase serophs memories of her from when he was in the coma that way it wont matter to him either if i feel like keeping him around, so forget the goddess and mitsuki and trying to salvage her personality that was never ruined in the first place because it was mitsukis own choice to save alena and it puts her effort in vein to send alena into danger where she may very well die and lose the spared life mitsuki risked her memories to get for her and then she would accomplish nothing so its selfish to allow her into that risky situation when mitsuki is perfectly fine where she is and is ecactly where snow desires her to stay, if she wants to bring her back that can be done later with a few ajustment because writing and figuring out problems and things like this so they make logical since is wat i plan to do for a living because im gonna be a writer so back off her and return alena back to the school and let her live the life her friend cared enough to give her while giving up something of importance to her ok? There are but a few problems with this. 1. Mitsuki is the Goddess of Sadness and Lonleyness. This ticks Alena off. 2. No one has said anything that would defer Alena from going there. 3. Its Alena's fault that Mitsuki is memory-less. 4. Alena owes Mitsuki her life. 5. Alena is rash and reckless, and would probably go anyway. Trying not to be a pest, but yet still trying not to leave any plot holes. |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:36 am
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killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw well just back off if snow says no then leave it at that ok? you cant control her and she can make her own decisions if she wanted someones openion of whether she should be the goddess still or not she wuld have asked for it so give her space cause next time she goes for you with knivea im not holding her back or attempting to calm her, if it gets that bad again you two can work thing out urselves and i would bet that snow would end up winning and u'd just waist ur breath on a pointless argument that results in nothing more then annoying you both and getting you angry with each other and then people will choose sides and then the sides will go to war in which many cuss words and profanities are thrown around then a huge battlish scene that result in one of you and some of ur annoyed followers leaving the guild and then others who stay will be sad because one or many of you are gone and then we are missing many key characters then pandomonium breaks out causing mass panic and the ultimate anihalation of blood moon through confusion and anger that all started over a small argument that could easily have been resolved if you hadnt been so demanding and tried to compromise ((I'm sorry.........I don't want things to go that far. All I really want is to salvage Alena's personality and continuity at the end of this.)) just because she doesnt correct one thing doesnt change her entire personal, she made a mistake, she should get over it, mitsuki isnt coming bakc like snow already said so theres no point in getting her her memories because then snow would have to bring mitsuki back in and she doesnt want to do that, its better of she doesnt remember i can even erase serophs memories of her from when he was in the coma that way it wont matter to him either if i feel like keeping him around, so forget the goddess and mitsuki and trying to salvage her personality that was never ruined in the first place because it was mitsukis own choice to save alena and it puts her effort in vein to send alena into danger where she may very well die and lose the spared life mitsuki risked her memories to get for her and then she would accomplish nothing so its selfish to allow her into that risky situation when mitsuki is perfectly fine where she is and is ecactly where snow desires her to stay, if she wants to bring her back that can be done later with a few ajustment because writing and figuring out problems and things like this so they make logical since is wat i plan to do for a living because im gonna be a writer so back off her and return alena back to the school and let her live the life her friend cared enough to give her while giving up something of importance to her ok? There are but a few problems with this. 1. Mitsuki is the Goddess of Sadness and Lonleyness. This ticks Alena off. 2. No one has said anything that would defer Alena from going there. 3. Its Alena's fault that Mitsuki is memory-less. 4. Alena owes Mitsuki her life. 5. Alena is rash and reckless, and would probably go anyway. Trying not to be a pest, but yet still trying not to leave any plot holes. ok 1. i didnt say she was in a good place i said she's where snow wants her, so just leave it at that 2. thats because they are to kind of people to discourage you 3. its not souly her fault, mitsuki CHOSE to give up her memory in echange for her life 4. exactly you owe her your life so live it and let her take the conciquences she chose to take for you of he rown free will 5. she doesnt have to go and unless ur willing to play goddess then she wont be fighting anyone so she should probably have an epiphany or something telling her she needs to turn back and live the life mitsuki gave her the chance to finish living
1. The point, or Impact (cause I love using debate terms) is that after all Mitsuki's done for her, Alena believes that Mitsuki deserves a better life. 2. Impact: she still ends up going. 3. Alena blames the Goddess 4. If someone were to try telling Alena that, and somehow convince her, (which will be difficult) she mights stop. 5. I may have to. At this point, I may be willing to. But I can't guarentee that it won't absolutly suck. |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:43 am
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Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw well just back off if snow says no then leave it at that ok? you cant control her and she can make her own decisions if she wanted someones openion of whether she should be the goddess still or not she wuld have asked for it so give her space cause next time she goes for you with knivea im not holding her back or attempting to calm her, if it gets that bad again you two can work thing out urselves and i would bet that snow would end up winning and u'd just waist ur breath on a pointless argument that results in nothing more then annoying you both and getting you angry with each other and then people will choose sides and then the sides will go to war in which many cuss words and profanities are thrown around then a huge battlish scene that result in one of you and some of ur annoyed followers leaving the guild and then others who stay will be sad because one or many of you are gone and then we are missing many key characters then pandomonium breaks out causing mass panic and the ultimate anihalation of blood moon through confusion and anger that all started over a small argument that could easily have been resolved if you hadnt been so demanding and tried to compromise ((I'm sorry.........I don't want things to go that far. All I really want is to salvage Alena's personality and continuity at the end of this.)) just because she doesnt correct one thing doesnt change her entire personal, she made a mistake, she should get over it, mitsuki isnt coming bakc like snow already said so theres no point in getting her her memories because then snow would have to bring mitsuki back in and she doesnt want to do that, its better of she doesnt remember i can even erase serophs memories of her from when he was in the coma that way it wont matter to him either if i feel like keeping him around, so forget the goddess and mitsuki and trying to salvage her personality that was never ruined in the first place because it was mitsukis own choice to save alena and it puts her effort in vein to send alena into danger where she may very well die and lose the spared life mitsuki risked her memories to get for her and then she would accomplish nothing so its selfish to allow her into that risky situation when mitsuki is perfectly fine where she is and is ecactly where snow desires her to stay, if she wants to bring her back that can be done later with a few ajustment because writing and figuring out problems and things like this so they make logical since is wat i plan to do for a living because im gonna be a writer so back off her and return alena back to the school and let her live the life her friend cared enough to give her while giving up something of importance to her ok? There are but a few problems with this. 1. Mitsuki is the Goddess of Sadness and Lonleyness. This ticks Alena off. 2. No one has said anything that would defer Alena from going there. 3. Its Alena's fault that Mitsuki is memory-less. 4. Alena owes Mitsuki her life. 5. Alena is rash and reckless, and would probably go anyway. Trying not to be a pest, but yet still trying not to leave any plot holes. ok 1. i didnt say she was in a good place i said she's where snow wants her, so just leave it at that 2. thats because they are to kind of people to discourage you 3. its not souly her fault, mitsuki CHOSE to give up her memory in echange for her life 4. exactly you owe her your life so live it and let her take the conciquences she chose to take for you of he rown free will 5. she doesnt have to go and unless ur willing to play goddess then she wont be fighting anyone so she should probably have an epiphany or something telling her she needs to turn back and live the life mitsuki gave her the chance to finish living 1. The point, or Impact (cause I love using debate terms) is that after all Mitsuki's done for her, Alena believes that Mitsuki deserves a better life. 2. Impact: she still ends up going. 3. Alena blames the Goddess 4. If someone were to try telling Alena that, and somehow convince her, (which will be difficult) she mights stop. 5. I may have to. At this point, I may be willing to. But I can't guarentee that it won't absolutly suck.
dont be difficult, mitsuki doesnt need her memories, she is fine where she is, and snow placed her there for a reason if you bring back her memories then mitsuki will have to return because she'll miss her friends and snow doesnt want anything ore to do with the god/goddesses so do something to turn her around and not fight the goddess cause snows not going to rp the goddess as she strongly stated and you'll be at a standstill there may be a few holes as you said before but if you bring back her memory there will be even more cause mitsuki will fade from existence anyway and people will wonder wat happened because snow doesnt want to rp with her anymore so forget returning her memory and just get alena back to the school, i dont care wat you make her do epiphany, vision of some kind,passes out and had a dream, and angel comes and explains everything to her, anything idc but this isnt going to work out at all for the better i know when stories are headed toward a dead end thats when you need to change strategy a bit and revise, go back and let alena start fresh again in her new life and live her life as mitsuki would want her to |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:45 am
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killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw just because she doesnt correct one thing doesnt change her entire personal, she made a mistake, she should get over it, mitsuki isnt coming bakc like snow already said so theres no point in getting her her memories because then snow would have to bring mitsuki back in and she doesnt want to do that, its better of she doesnt remember i can even erase serophs memories of her from when he was in the coma that way it wont matter to him either if i feel like keeping him around, so forget the goddess and mitsuki and trying to salvage her personality that was never ruined in the first place because it was mitsukis own choice to save alena and it puts her effort in vein to send alena into danger where she may very well die and lose the spared life mitsuki risked her memories to get for her and then she would accomplish nothing so its selfish to allow her into that risky situation when mitsuki is perfectly fine where she is and is ecactly where snow desires her to stay, if she wants to bring her back that can be done later with a few ajustment because writing and figuring out problems and things like this so they make logical since is wat i plan to do for a living because im gonna be a writer so back off her and return alena back to the school and let her live the life her friend cared enough to give her while giving up something of importance to her ok? There are but a few problems with this. 1. Mitsuki is the Goddess of Sadness and Lonleyness. This ticks Alena off. 2. No one has said anything that would defer Alena from going there. 3. Its Alena's fault that Mitsuki is memory-less. 4. Alena owes Mitsuki her life. 5. Alena is rash and reckless, and would probably go anyway. Trying not to be a pest, but yet still trying not to leave any plot holes. ok 1. i didnt say she was in a good place i said she's where snow wants her, so just leave it at that 2. thats because they are to kind of people to discourage you 3. its not souly her fault, mitsuki CHOSE to give up her memory in echange for her life 4. exactly you owe her your life so live it and let her take the conciquences she chose to take for you of he rown free will 5. she doesnt have to go and unless ur willing to play goddess then she wont be fighting anyone so she should probably have an epiphany or something telling her she needs to turn back and live the life mitsuki gave her the chance to finish living 1. The point, or Impact (cause I love using debate terms) is that after all Mitsuki's done for her, Alena believes that Mitsuki deserves a better life. 2. Impact: she still ends up going. 3. Alena blames the Goddess 4. If someone were to try telling Alena that, and somehow convince her, (which will be difficult) she mights stop. 5. I may have to. At this point, I may be willing to. But I can't guarentee that it won't absolutly suck. dont be difficult, mitsuki doesnt need her memories, she is fine where she is, and snow placed her there for a reason if you bring back her memories then mitsuki will have to return because she'll miss her friends and snow doesnt want anything ore to do with the god/goddesses so do something to turn her around and not fight the goddess cause snows not going to rp the goddess as she strongly stated and you'll be at a standstill there may be a few holes as you said before but if you bring back her memory there will be even more cause mitsuki will fade from existence anyway and people will wonder wat happened because snow doesnt want to rp with her anymore so forget returning her memory and just get alena back to the school, i dont care wat you make her do epiphany, vision of some kind,passes out and had a dream, and angel comes and explains everything to her, anything idc but this isnt going to work out at all for the better i know when stories are headed toward a dead end thats when you need to change strategy a bit and revise, go back and let alena start fresh again in her new life and live her life as mitsuki would want her to
((I did once give Alena amniesia to keep her from going somewhere I didn't want her to go to. Would it end up stale/repetitive if I did that again?)) |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:51 am
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Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw just because she doesnt correct one thing doesnt change her entire personal, she made a mistake, she should get over it, mitsuki isnt coming bakc like snow already said so theres no point in getting her her memories because then snow would have to bring mitsuki back in and she doesnt want to do that, its better of she doesnt remember i can even erase serophs memories of her from when he was in the coma that way it wont matter to him either if i feel like keeping him around, so forget the goddess and mitsuki and trying to salvage her personality that was never ruined in the first place because it was mitsukis own choice to save alena and it puts her effort in vein to send alena into danger where she may very well die and lose the spared life mitsuki risked her memories to get for her and then she would accomplish nothing so its selfish to allow her into that risky situation when mitsuki is perfectly fine where she is and is ecactly where snow desires her to stay, if she wants to bring her back that can be done later with a few ajustment because writing and figuring out problems and things like this so they make logical since is wat i plan to do for a living because im gonna be a writer so back off her and return alena back to the school and let her live the life her friend cared enough to give her while giving up something of importance to her ok? There are but a few problems with this. 1. Mitsuki is the Goddess of Sadness and Lonleyness. This ticks Alena off. 2. No one has said anything that would defer Alena from going there. 3. Its Alena's fault that Mitsuki is memory-less. 4. Alena owes Mitsuki her life. 5. Alena is rash and reckless, and would probably go anyway. Trying not to be a pest, but yet still trying not to leave any plot holes. ok 1. i didnt say she was in a good place i said she's where snow wants her, so just leave it at that 2. thats because they are to kind of people to discourage you 3. its not souly her fault, mitsuki CHOSE to give up her memory in echange for her life 4. exactly you owe her your life so live it and let her take the conciquences she chose to take for you of he rown free will 5. she doesnt have to go and unless ur willing to play goddess then she wont be fighting anyone so she should probably have an epiphany or something telling her she needs to turn back and live the life mitsuki gave her the chance to finish living 1. The point, or Impact (cause I love using debate terms) is that after all Mitsuki's done for her, Alena believes that Mitsuki deserves a better life. 2. Impact: she still ends up going. 3. Alena blames the Goddess 4. If someone were to try telling Alena that, and somehow convince her, (which will be difficult) she mights stop. 5. I may have to. At this point, I may be willing to. But I can't guarentee that it won't absolutly suck. dont be difficult, mitsuki doesnt need her memories, she is fine where she is, and snow placed her there for a reason if you bring back her memories then mitsuki will have to return because she'll miss her friends and snow doesnt want anything ore to do with the god/goddesses so do something to turn her around and not fight the goddess cause snows not going to rp the goddess as she strongly stated and you'll be at a standstill there may be a few holes as you said before but if you bring back her memory there will be even more cause mitsuki will fade from existence anyway and people will wonder wat happened because snow doesnt want to rp with her anymore so forget returning her memory and just get alena back to the school, i dont care wat you make her do epiphany, vision of some kind,passes out and had a dream, and angel comes and explains everything to her, anything idc but this isnt going to work out at all for the better i know when stories are headed toward a dead end thats when you need to change strategy a bit and revise, go back and let alena start fresh again in her new life and live her life as mitsuki would want her to ((I did once give Alena amniesia to keep her from going somewhere I didn't want her to go to. Would it end up stale/repetitive if I did that again?))
if thats how you want it then fine, and it was a while back so i doubt many people would remember tht time anyway and if she gets it in a different way this time then its not repetitive, just get her away from the goddess so you wont have to send her out to finish a story that will open a new one that will never continue, its like writing a book and setting up the ending for a second book, then never writing one, it leaves a thousand questions to those reading it then they get angry and then all hell breaks loose and they riot against the ones responsible demanding retrobusion then when they arent given what they want they get even angrier and then it turns catostrophic and the whole place is in an uproar cause they need that tied in to make things make sense and then this whole place falls apart because people are confused and annoyed |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:55 am
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killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw ok 1. i didnt say she was in a good place i said she's where snow wants her, so just leave it at that 2. thats because they are to kind of people to discourage you 3. its not souly her fault, mitsuki CHOSE to give up her memory in echange for her life 4. exactly you owe her your life so live it and let her take the conciquences she chose to take for you of he rown free will 5. she doesnt have to go and unless ur willing to play goddess then she wont be fighting anyone so she should probably have an epiphany or something telling her she needs to turn back and live the life mitsuki gave her the chance to finish living 1. The point, or Impact (cause I love using debate terms) is that after all Mitsuki's done for her, Alena believes that Mitsuki deserves a better life. 2. Impact: she still ends up going. 3. Alena blames the Goddess 4. If someone were to try telling Alena that, and somehow convince her, (which will be difficult) she mights stop. 5. I may have to. At this point, I may be willing to. But I can't guarentee that it won't absolutly suck. dont be difficult, mitsuki doesnt need her memories, she is fine where she is, and snow placed her there for a reason if you bring back her memories then mitsuki will have to return because she'll miss her friends and snow doesnt want anything ore to do with the god/goddesses so do something to turn her around and not fight the goddess cause snows not going to rp the goddess as she strongly stated and you'll be at a standstill there may be a few holes as you said before but if you bring back her memory there will be even more cause mitsuki will fade from existence anyway and people will wonder wat happened because snow doesnt want to rp with her anymore so forget returning her memory and just get alena back to the school, i dont care wat you make her do epiphany, vision of some kind,passes out and had a dream, and angel comes and explains everything to her, anything idc but this isnt going to work out at all for the better i know when stories are headed toward a dead end thats when you need to change strategy a bit and revise, go back and let alena start fresh again in her new life and live her life as mitsuki would want her to ((I did once give Alena amniesia to keep her from going somewhere I didn't want her to go to. Would it end up stale/repetitive if I did that again?)) if thats how you want it then fine, and it was a while back so i doubt many people would remember tht time anyway and if she gets it in a different way this time then its not repetitive, just get her away from the goddess so you wont have to send her out to finish a story that will open a new one that will never continue, its like writing a book and setting up the ending for a second book, then never writing one, it leaves a thousand questions to those reading it then they get angry and then all hell breaks loose and they riot against the ones responsible demanding retrobusion then when they arent given what they want they get even angrier and then it turns catostrophic and the whole place is in an uproar cause they need that tied in to make things make sense and then this whole place falls apart because people are confused and annoyed
"If thats how you want it then fine?"
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 1:56 am
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Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw ok 1. i didnt say she was in a good place i said she's where snow wants her, so just leave it at that 2. thats because they are to kind of people to discourage you 3. its not souly her fault, mitsuki CHOSE to give up her memory in echange for her life 4. exactly you owe her your life so live it and let her take the conciquences she chose to take for you of he rown free will 5. she doesnt have to go and unless ur willing to play goddess then she wont be fighting anyone so she should probably have an epiphany or something telling her she needs to turn back and live the life mitsuki gave her the chance to finish living 1. The point, or Impact (cause I love using debate terms) is that after all Mitsuki's done for her, Alena believes that Mitsuki deserves a better life. 2. Impact: she still ends up going. 3. Alena blames the Goddess 4. If someone were to try telling Alena that, and somehow convince her, (which will be difficult) she mights stop. 5. I may have to. At this point, I may be willing to. But I can't guarentee that it won't absolutly suck. dont be difficult, mitsuki doesnt need her memories, she is fine where she is, and snow placed her there for a reason if you bring back her memories then mitsuki will have to return because she'll miss her friends and snow doesnt want anything ore to do with the god/goddesses so do something to turn her around and not fight the goddess cause snows not going to rp the goddess as she strongly stated and you'll be at a standstill there may be a few holes as you said before but if you bring back her memory there will be even more cause mitsuki will fade from existence anyway and people will wonder wat happened because snow doesnt want to rp with her anymore so forget returning her memory and just get alena back to the school, i dont care wat you make her do epiphany, vision of some kind,passes out and had a dream, and angel comes and explains everything to her, anything idc but this isnt going to work out at all for the better i know when stories are headed toward a dead end thats when you need to change strategy a bit and revise, go back and let alena start fresh again in her new life and live her life as mitsuki would want her to ((I did once give Alena amniesia to keep her from going somewhere I didn't want her to go to. Would it end up stale/repetitive if I did that again?)) if thats how you want it then fine, and it was a while back so i doubt many people would remember tht time anyway and if she gets it in a different way this time then its not repetitive, just get her away from the goddess so you wont have to send her out to finish a story that will open a new one that will never continue, its like writing a book and setting up the ending for a second book, then never writing one, it leaves a thousand questions to those reading it then they get angry and then all hell breaks loose and they riot against the ones responsible demanding retrobusion then when they arent given what they want they get even angrier and then it turns catostrophic and the whole place is in an uproar cause they need that tied in to make things make sense and then this whole place falls apart because people are confused and annoyed "If thats how you want it then fine?" Is there something wrong with it?
no, but perhaps i worded that wrong, i mean there are multiple ways you can play it out, its not my story and yo are free to choose what you want to happen, but it can include her fighting the goddess |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 2:00 am
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killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw Alena_Ryu killer_klaw dont be difficult, mitsuki doesnt need her memories, she is fine where she is, and snow placed her there for a reason if you bring back her memories then mitsuki will have to return because she'll miss her friends and snow doesnt want anything ore to do with the god/goddesses so do something to turn her around and not fight the goddess cause snows not going to rp the goddess as she strongly stated and you'll be at a standstill there may be a few holes as you said before but if you bring back her memory there will be even more cause mitsuki will fade from existence anyway and people will wonder wat happened because snow doesnt want to rp with her anymore so forget returning her memory and just get alena back to the school, i dont care wat you make her do epiphany, vision of some kind,passes out and had a dream, and angel comes and explains everything to her, anything idc but this isnt going to work out at all for the better i know when stories are headed toward a dead end thats when you need to change strategy a bit and revise, go back and let alena start fresh again in her new life and live her life as mitsuki would want her to ((I did once give Alena amniesia to keep her from going somewhere I didn't want her to go to. Would it end up stale/repetitive if I did that again?)) if thats how you want it then fine, and it was a while back so i doubt many people would remember tht time anyway and if she gets it in a different way this time then its not repetitive, just get her away from the goddess so you wont have to send her out to finish a story that will open a new one that will never continue, its like writing a book and setting up the ending for a second book, then never writing one, it leaves a thousand questions to those reading it then they get angry and then all hell breaks loose and they riot against the ones responsible demanding retrobusion then when they arent given what they want they get even angrier and then it turns catostrophic and the whole place is in an uproar cause they need that tied in to make things make sense and then this whole place falls apart because people are confused and annoyed "If thats how you want it then fine?" Is there something wrong with it? no, but perhaps i worded that wrong, i mean there are multiple ways you can play it out, its not my story and yo are free to choose what you want to happen, but it can include her fighting the goddess
Nah, I don't care about that anymore.
All I need now is a way for the amniesia to come about in the next 5 seconds. Thats my only issue now. Alena's right about to head to heaven.
(and after that, I probably should find some way to take out that illusion.) |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 8:38 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 8:46 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 8:50 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 8:52 am
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vampiregirl135 Alena_Ryu vampiregirl135 ((anyone online? what did i miss while i was gone?)) ((You missed a big fight between me and Snow. It may be resolved, but we won't know until she gets on.)) ((oh crap i did miss alot...hm...oh well...))
((And I am hungry. ^^)) |
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 9:02 am
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Posted: Sat Jan 24, 2009 9:09 am
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Alena_Ryu vampiregirl135 Alena_Ryu vampiregirl135 ((anyone online? what did i miss while i was gone?)) ((You missed a big fight between me and Snow. It may be resolved, but we won't know until she gets on.)) ((oh crap i did miss alot...hm...oh well...)) ((And I am hungry. ^^))
((i just got finished eating breakfast! ^,..,^)) |
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